Chapter one of Anders' novel
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Cheers for posting this Jack.
Anyone who reads it is most welcome/invited to give me feedback on your thoughts - shite/huh?/patchy/good/best-seller
- which may help me with progress.
Anyone who reads it is most welcome/invited to give me feedback on your thoughts - shite/huh?/patchy/good/best-seller
Anders my friend I could see and smell that fresh rain falling on that road. I could feel the truck shake the car as it went by.
The town old, but now its today. The first two arrive there years ago. I could sense them. The dare devil part of it with the tape cranking out some tunes. And then its over. In other words. If I got what I believ you want me to, from it. Then that is your answer.
[This message has been edited by djv (edited 07-05-2001).]
The town old, but now its today. The first two arrive there years ago. I could sense them. The dare devil part of it with the tape cranking out some tunes. And then its over. In other words. If I got what I believ you want me to, from it. Then that is your answer.
[This message has been edited by djv (edited 07-05-2001).]
Anders! Just a small note about your guy name Samedi. It means saturday in french, not sunday!
If you want to call him dimanche then it means sunday! Thanks for having it between 1812 and before 1967... I feel 1837 is somewhere....
Ya none of my business. But there's that number again.
And 1967 a good year. My first brand new car. Impala Super Sport 327 300 ponies. And went like hell. Anders kind of like that story. I feal that speed was up a little. Not just the music.
djv, while our gals will rub our feet during Jack superbowl convention, i'll tell ya all the truth about it!
1837 - D'OH!! Right you are - man, have I forgotten more than I learnt in School C French or what. Still, an easy correction.
Lundi, ..., Mercredi, ... Vendredi ...ah sod it ...
Lundi, ..., Mercredi, ... Vendredi ...ah sod it ...
Sharing your work with the rest of the MJ family, eh?
Great start to a future best seller....
Where's chapter two??
Great start to a future best seller....
Where's chapter two??
anders, no one ever labeled me god's gift to creative writing, but what exposure i've had has suggested that first person novels are really hard to pull off. third person usually opens up a lot more possibilities, especially for character development. just a thought, what's your take?
